![]() ![]() I think she did this because of the lack of planning and cohesiveness as she was writing. The author continued to make the same mistakes that were found throughout the other books. I constantly found myself annoyed with the lack of explanation.Īs I read these books, I continuously lost hope for any potential that this series would improve. It felt like the author was too focused on being mysterious and keeping things for "twists" when there was a perfect place to add some explanation to hint toward the twists that were coming. The explanation that a good fantasy novel would have is not there. The characters just accept that things are happening, when a realistic and well thought out character would question everything. I wish that there had been more description, less cringe-y dialogue, and more world building. There's just an immense lack of depth in the characters, the plot, and the world. I still don't understand the point of the story. ![]() The entire story was just so haphazard that I was purely reading them all to get some sort of closure. ![]() By the end of the fourth installation, I still hardly knew the characters or even cared about their stories. ![]() If you squash all of the little books together and edit it, it would be a decent full-length novel, but it just seemed like the author wanted to churn out chunks of the story (which do not fully connect) and publish them on Amazon without actually editing them. This novella and its sequels have a lot of potential to be fantastically cheesy and fun. ![]()
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